Thursday, September 25, 2008

A Haiku


Yesterday it started to rain in the evening, and poured heavily for about two hours. At about six thirty this morning, I was surprised to see the sun out, shining brightly. Except for the water collected in the dents of the playground, the rains yesterday were as if a distant dream.

A small haiku I composed, to express my surprise at this:

Overnight rains
Glint in pools of sunlit dawn:
Tear-stained dreams.

Is it any good?

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